Friday, November 30, 2012

Univ. of Chicago Essay



ESSAY OPTION 5.

In the spirit of adventurous inquiry, pose a question of your own. If your prompt is original and thoughtful, then you should have little trouble writing a great essay. Draw on your best qualities as a writer, thinker, visionary, social critic, sage, citizen of the world, or future citizen of the University of Chicago; take a little risk, and have fun

Where Is My Happy Ending?

   The umpire blew his whistle, loud and clear, the forwards kicked the ball, signifying the beginning of the match. Until then, I had been rather full of hope - yet insecure of what might happen next. That was how my very first game as a member of KMLA's soccer team, CGV, began and ended as a horrible nightmare.
   It was early April, when small snowflakes still flew in the atmosphere because of the cold weather. I was on the starting match squad, supposed to manage the defense of our team. I found it both exciting and scary to watch opponent actually dribble and pass to each other within a few meters from me. But wait - only a few metes? The ball was flying towards me - it was my turn to receive and return the ball. I aimed and swung my leg, stiff and horrified. But I guess I missed. The center forwards forcefully towards me, elegantly possessed the ball, swiftly turned around and powerfully struck a nice, clean shot. Match score 0 - 1, the inception of ruin, doom and nightmare.
   The following 60 minuets, needless to be explained, were so painful that I only waited for the final whistle to be blown. I kept scolding myself: "What have you done!" "You blotched an important game - your team might lose!" "Everything went wrong because of you!? Honestly, I hated myself. And I guess my teammates, although not explicitly, expressed sorrow and disappointment about my stupid mistake. Fortunately, Our team scored an equalizer in the 2nd half. Nonetheless, agony and shame did not leave my mind for a couple of weeks.
   I wish there was a happy ending to this awful, painful story. If I had overcome my failure and, on the next match, scored the match winning goal, this would have been a cliche, another common hero story. Frankly, there have been no changes in my soccer skills nor there has been a second match for me. Only a recognition and revelation of one history-lasting proverb: "This too shall pass." It is important not only to learn from failures, but also to learn how to bear them. Pain is short and life is long. 

Sunday, November 25, 2012

Take-home Assignment

Topic: the Korean government should sue Japan on behalf of the victims of imperial Japan

Personal belief: I agree with the argument stated

It is true that imperial Japan has done much harm on its victims, mainly Koreans. However, suing Japan is not the right choice for South Korea: it is not a practical, viable solution.

Firstly, the Korean government does not have the justification enough to claim its right to demand more compensation from the Japanese government. The Normalization Treaty of 1965 states that both countries will “no longer discuss on this issue” for Japan handed over some million dollars. Also, the idea that the descendants must atone for whatever their ancestors have done wrong, as many call it the “corruption of blood,” seems to be unreasonable, since the current government is clearly different from the imperial regime.

Moreover, the practicality of the judicial process is unfavorable. In order to sue Japan at the ICC, Korea needs specific defendants, which have mostly been already executed shortly after the WW2. Thus, Korea shouldn’t sue Japan but find other ways to help the victims of imperial Japan. 

Earthlings - Academic Film Review


     

Animal Rights and Emotionalism


     Animal Rights? Cruelty of meat-eating? Personally, I’m not a strong advocate of animal protection.  Whenever I hear about people spending hundreds of dollars on buying pet cloths and nail polishing their cats, I feel that there is something wrong going on right now. I get it – animals are in fact great companions of humans and they too are emotional beings. But shouldn’t we reconsider our treatment of animals once again? Should people waste thousands of dollars on pets while dozens of children in sub-Saharan Africa are starving to death every hour? I guess people these days are too fond of their fellow creatures that they sometimes even forget who they are, Homo Sapiens.
     The same phenomenon occurs as a response to the film Earthlings. A true sensation, this renowned documentary film, directed by Shaun Monson and narrated by Joaquin Phoenix, provides us with tremendous shock and revelation. The film is a simple yet emphatic work that drives people to confront the inconvenient truth of how humans treat animals in the industries regarding food, pets, clothing, entertainment and scientific research. However, people have reacted in the wrong way, solely obsessed with emotional responses to the movie. And at the same time, there also many factors within the film that misleads the audience to not engage in serious thinking. For sure, Earthlings brought much sensation, once having become one of the most widely discussed film, but there are also much to critique about its accuracy and limitations in conveying information.
     Earthlings, in general, lacks in three important essential characteristics of a good documentary film - objectivity, thoroughness and tangibility. Talking about objectivity, the film from the very beginning seems to despise the virtue of maintaining a broad, fair perspective. In its introduction, “humans,” “animals,” and finally “nature” are introduced as three key elements of our planet Earth. At first glance the movie seems to talk about the interaction between these three and how we should bolster harmony. However, the subsequent contents are unfortunately represents anything but objectivity. Only picturing the cruelness of humanity with excerpts of videos clips seemingly from hidden cameras, the director, I guess, tries to imprint a negative image of human beings. Of course, it is true that this film is meant to be an expose, but an endless continuation of violent images and brutal scenes doesn’t persuade but only sickens the audience. It seems that weighing both sides and analyzing each one’s problems and significance would have made the over message much more credible. After watching the terrifying videos clips, I felt that this film wasn’t much more than a hodgepodge of slaughterhouse CCTV videos.
     Such problems in objectivity directly lead to Earthling’s dearth of thoroughness. As mentioned above, picturing a comprehensive overview of the issue ensures the viewers that the speaker is not a dogged, arrogant doctrinaire who only knows about his own arguments. Interaction with the opposing arguments is what that truly enhances the quality of discussion. However, this film completely condones possible objections but misleads the audience with insufficient information. The film’s discussion of pets and entertainment neglects the fact that there are many laws and restrictions both domestic and international to protect the basic rights of humans. The movie depicts the perpetrators as representatives of all humans – despite that many of us are thoroughly concerned to legitimize bills for the sake of animals. Moreover, there are numerous restrictions within the scientific community that ensure safe, ethical animal experimentation. In the U.S., for instance, there is the Animal Welfare Act of 1966 (AWA), and in many countries of Europe there are more recent examples in the status quo. Thus the content of Earthlings is too one-sided and insufficient that it doesn’t “inform” but merely “shocks.”
 Lastly, Earthlings doesn’t give any answer to the questions it inquires. One of the major remarks by other critics on this film, the lack of tangible course of action or resolution hinders this work from reaching fruition. The basic reaction to this film goes as following: instant shock and emotional urge to protect the animals; reconsideration of the issue, finding ways to solve the problems in the status quo; realization that the film doesn’t give any answer; dismay, and return to daily life. Since the film discusses a broad range of topics – from pets to scientific research – it seems almost impossible to come up with a solid solution. And without enlightening suggestions to foster activism, the message, the omen Earthlings presents, remains frail and ineffective.
     Therefore, Monson’s crusade for animal rights and protection accomplished its most basic job – to alarm the general public and bring the veiled cruelty of animal treatment in many industries up to the surface. However, as the aforementioned reasons suggest, the documentary needs more information and more analysis. It should make more engagement with possible opposition – “Why is it so important to stop domestication of farm animals?,” “Isn’t it better to test with animals than with humans when developing new medication?” Such inquiries remain unanswered, and I believe many of those who watched the film would have felt the same. To become great - something more than good- Earthlings should be able to persuade even people like me who is skeptical, unwilling to blindly succumb to emotionalism.

Thursday, November 22, 2012

Fictions in a Flash



10 Flash Fictions 

1. Neither the innocent citizen nor the upright police officer brings the rise of a hero; only a true villain does so.

2. 12:00 AM Keyboard tapping, pencil scribbling. Two cans of Red Bull on the desk.

     1:30  AM "Tick!" One can open. Four pages to go. 

     4:00 AM Empty cans, traces of weird curves and indiscernible marks on the paper. Lap top turned off. Complete silence. A few seconds later, a snor.

3. "Hey, dude, Jack? Wasn't the test hard?" Jack replies. "Yeah, I almost missed the absolute value sign on the end of the equation!" A cough, silence.

4. College counselling class: group meeting.
     "Ma'am, which colleges offer FA's to international applicants?" "The top few"
     "Ma'am, how can I get a private domestic scholarship?" "Get an admission from a top school"
      I'm sorry mom ...

5. A warm pistol, a piece of letter and a pool of blood. The mother cries, cries and cries. 

6. The boy, after playing soccer with his friends, runs into the house. So thirsty, he heads straightly towards the refrigerator. He opens a bottle of purple juice, gulps and throws up - "Why is it so salty!" Mom says, "Why are you drinking soy sauce?"

7. Alarm rings. "Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!" Hit snooze, sleep again. "Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!" Once again, smash the button. "Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!" "Argh!" But this time what I hit was not the alarm clock, but the dorm parent's hand. 

8. Warm rice with my favorite crab soup. TV is on, and my brother's chattering. Here, I am - home sweet home.

9. Six years of elementary school seemed endless. Three years of middle school left some meaningful memories. Three years of high school, gone in a flash. 

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Thursday, November 8, 2012

Autism, Children and Society - Ben X Review

 
     Ben X (2007), from its very beginning to its resolution, delivers a clear social message. The film provokes the audience to think about one of the problems, at once prevalent and less emphasized in our society, autism. How do most people think of this issue? It would not be a serious exaggeration to claim that all of us believe in equal treatment, respect and rights for every individual without discriminating one’s physical and psychological disadvantages. In other words, everyone thinks that we should not disregard the disabled. Nonetheless, reality is foul, truth inconvenient and society corrupted – humans are fond of ridiculing those who look different from themselves. Rulers imposed by the majority and the powerful binds the weak and less represented. Classrooms are never exceptions.

     Personally, I do have some experiences interacting with a classmate with autism during my middle school years. Based on my observations, it seems inevitable that autistic kids often are subject to spotlight. They show distinct behaviors, somewhat peculiar ones. One kid was known for his aggressiveness. He wasn't bulky and brawn but still he had extraordinary physical abilities. Walking down hallways, he sometimes clapped his hands so loudly that the clinging noise rang the whole school. Once he became famous for his weird claps, mean kids teased by clapping with silly faces whenever the boy passed by. The innocent kid never noticed the animosity hidden. The autistic boy thought that the sneers were smiles and their teasing, affection.

     However, the problems that autistic students suffer at public schools are much serious if the victims are females - a part of reality that even Ben X couldn't fully picture. There was actually one case of such tragedy in our school. She wasn't aggressive by a slightest sense. She didn't make much noise - she only stayed at her seat. She just stayed, still and quietly. However, middle school students, I guess, are yet too immature. I didn't get to learn what exactly happened, but I am sure something happened, and something horrible. I think it was some sort of harassment. The boys responsible were punished by the school board and later, some were transferred to different schools. 

     Watching such sad incidents, I felt that we really need much more care towards autistic students. Of course, these kids have choices of attending special schools were there are private tutors always ready for help and classmates with similar disadvantages and issues. However, according to what I have heard from one of the parents, the main reason why parents send autistic children to public schools is that they want their kids to get along with others, learn social life and do not get secluded from the society totally. Thus the parents and their children are showing great courage. What we should do, as a response, is to give them great care and attention, not teasing and discrimination.

     In short, it seems that the movie Ben X reminded me of such stories and experiences. I hope I get to think more about many problems and issues in our society, starting from ones close to my daily life. And also, I believe others who have watched this movie, would have felt in the same way as I have done. If more people get to think twice about autism, children and society, Ben X can never be a failure, but a powerful medium of enlightenment.