Friday, November 30, 2012

Univ. of Chicago Essay



ESSAY OPTION 5.

In the spirit of adventurous inquiry, pose a question of your own. If your prompt is original and thoughtful, then you should have little trouble writing a great essay. Draw on your best qualities as a writer, thinker, visionary, social critic, sage, citizen of the world, or future citizen of the University of Chicago; take a little risk, and have fun

Where Is My Happy Ending?

   The umpire blew his whistle, loud and clear, the forwards kicked the ball, signifying the beginning of the match. Until then, I had been rather full of hope - yet insecure of what might happen next. That was how my very first game as a member of KMLA's soccer team, CGV, began and ended as a horrible nightmare.
   It was early April, when small snowflakes still flew in the atmosphere because of the cold weather. I was on the starting match squad, supposed to manage the defense of our team. I found it both exciting and scary to watch opponent actually dribble and pass to each other within a few meters from me. But wait - only a few metes? The ball was flying towards me - it was my turn to receive and return the ball. I aimed and swung my leg, stiff and horrified. But I guess I missed. The center forwards forcefully towards me, elegantly possessed the ball, swiftly turned around and powerfully struck a nice, clean shot. Match score 0 - 1, the inception of ruin, doom and nightmare.
   The following 60 minuets, needless to be explained, were so painful that I only waited for the final whistle to be blown. I kept scolding myself: "What have you done!" "You blotched an important game - your team might lose!" "Everything went wrong because of you!? Honestly, I hated myself. And I guess my teammates, although not explicitly, expressed sorrow and disappointment about my stupid mistake. Fortunately, Our team scored an equalizer in the 2nd half. Nonetheless, agony and shame did not leave my mind for a couple of weeks.
   I wish there was a happy ending to this awful, painful story. If I had overcome my failure and, on the next match, scored the match winning goal, this would have been a cliche, another common hero story. Frankly, there have been no changes in my soccer skills nor there has been a second match for me. Only a recognition and revelation of one history-lasting proverb: "This too shall pass." It is important not only to learn from failures, but also to learn how to bear them. Pain is short and life is long. 

Sunday, November 25, 2012

Take-home Assignment

Topic: the Korean government should sue Japan on behalf of the victims of imperial Japan

Personal belief: I agree with the argument stated

It is true that imperial Japan has done much harm on its victims, mainly Koreans. However, suing Japan is not the right choice for South Korea: it is not a practical, viable solution.

Firstly, the Korean government does not have the justification enough to claim its right to demand more compensation from the Japanese government. The Normalization Treaty of 1965 states that both countries will “no longer discuss on this issue” for Japan handed over some million dollars. Also, the idea that the descendants must atone for whatever their ancestors have done wrong, as many call it the “corruption of blood,” seems to be unreasonable, since the current government is clearly different from the imperial regime.

Moreover, the practicality of the judicial process is unfavorable. In order to sue Japan at the ICC, Korea needs specific defendants, which have mostly been already executed shortly after the WW2. Thus, Korea shouldn’t sue Japan but find other ways to help the victims of imperial Japan. 

Earthlings - Academic Film Review


     

Animal Rights and Emotionalism


     Animal Rights? Cruelty of meat-eating? Personally, I’m not a strong advocate of animal protection.  Whenever I hear about people spending hundreds of dollars on buying pet cloths and nail polishing their cats, I feel that there is something wrong going on right now. I get it – animals are in fact great companions of humans and they too are emotional beings. But shouldn’t we reconsider our treatment of animals once again? Should people waste thousands of dollars on pets while dozens of children in sub-Saharan Africa are starving to death every hour? I guess people these days are too fond of their fellow creatures that they sometimes even forget who they are, Homo Sapiens.
     The same phenomenon occurs as a response to the film Earthlings. A true sensation, this renowned documentary film, directed by Shaun Monson and narrated by Joaquin Phoenix, provides us with tremendous shock and revelation. The film is a simple yet emphatic work that drives people to confront the inconvenient truth of how humans treat animals in the industries regarding food, pets, clothing, entertainment and scientific research. However, people have reacted in the wrong way, solely obsessed with emotional responses to the movie. And at the same time, there also many factors within the film that misleads the audience to not engage in serious thinking. For sure, Earthlings brought much sensation, once having become one of the most widely discussed film, but there are also much to critique about its accuracy and limitations in conveying information.
     Earthlings, in general, lacks in three important essential characteristics of a good documentary film - objectivity, thoroughness and tangibility. Talking about objectivity, the film from the very beginning seems to despise the virtue of maintaining a broad, fair perspective. In its introduction, “humans,” “animals,” and finally “nature” are introduced as three key elements of our planet Earth. At first glance the movie seems to talk about the interaction between these three and how we should bolster harmony. However, the subsequent contents are unfortunately represents anything but objectivity. Only picturing the cruelness of humanity with excerpts of videos clips seemingly from hidden cameras, the director, I guess, tries to imprint a negative image of human beings. Of course, it is true that this film is meant to be an expose, but an endless continuation of violent images and brutal scenes doesn’t persuade but only sickens the audience. It seems that weighing both sides and analyzing each one’s problems and significance would have made the over message much more credible. After watching the terrifying videos clips, I felt that this film wasn’t much more than a hodgepodge of slaughterhouse CCTV videos.
     Such problems in objectivity directly lead to Earthling’s dearth of thoroughness. As mentioned above, picturing a comprehensive overview of the issue ensures the viewers that the speaker is not a dogged, arrogant doctrinaire who only knows about his own arguments. Interaction with the opposing arguments is what that truly enhances the quality of discussion. However, this film completely condones possible objections but misleads the audience with insufficient information. The film’s discussion of pets and entertainment neglects the fact that there are many laws and restrictions both domestic and international to protect the basic rights of humans. The movie depicts the perpetrators as representatives of all humans – despite that many of us are thoroughly concerned to legitimize bills for the sake of animals. Moreover, there are numerous restrictions within the scientific community that ensure safe, ethical animal experimentation. In the U.S., for instance, there is the Animal Welfare Act of 1966 (AWA), and in many countries of Europe there are more recent examples in the status quo. Thus the content of Earthlings is too one-sided and insufficient that it doesn’t “inform” but merely “shocks.”
 Lastly, Earthlings doesn’t give any answer to the questions it inquires. One of the major remarks by other critics on this film, the lack of tangible course of action or resolution hinders this work from reaching fruition. The basic reaction to this film goes as following: instant shock and emotional urge to protect the animals; reconsideration of the issue, finding ways to solve the problems in the status quo; realization that the film doesn’t give any answer; dismay, and return to daily life. Since the film discusses a broad range of topics – from pets to scientific research – it seems almost impossible to come up with a solid solution. And without enlightening suggestions to foster activism, the message, the omen Earthlings presents, remains frail and ineffective.
     Therefore, Monson’s crusade for animal rights and protection accomplished its most basic job – to alarm the general public and bring the veiled cruelty of animal treatment in many industries up to the surface. However, as the aforementioned reasons suggest, the documentary needs more information and more analysis. It should make more engagement with possible opposition – “Why is it so important to stop domestication of farm animals?,” “Isn’t it better to test with animals than with humans when developing new medication?” Such inquiries remain unanswered, and I believe many of those who watched the film would have felt the same. To become great - something more than good- Earthlings should be able to persuade even people like me who is skeptical, unwilling to blindly succumb to emotionalism.

Thursday, November 22, 2012

Fictions in a Flash



10 Flash Fictions 

1. Neither the innocent citizen nor the upright police officer brings the rise of a hero; only a true villain does so.

2. 12:00 AM Keyboard tapping, pencil scribbling. Two cans of Red Bull on the desk.

     1:30  AM "Tick!" One can open. Four pages to go. 

     4:00 AM Empty cans, traces of weird curves and indiscernible marks on the paper. Lap top turned off. Complete silence. A few seconds later, a snor.

3. "Hey, dude, Jack? Wasn't the test hard?" Jack replies. "Yeah, I almost missed the absolute value sign on the end of the equation!" A cough, silence.

4. College counselling class: group meeting.
     "Ma'am, which colleges offer FA's to international applicants?" "The top few"
     "Ma'am, how can I get a private domestic scholarship?" "Get an admission from a top school"
      I'm sorry mom ...

5. A warm pistol, a piece of letter and a pool of blood. The mother cries, cries and cries. 

6. The boy, after playing soccer with his friends, runs into the house. So thirsty, he heads straightly towards the refrigerator. He opens a bottle of purple juice, gulps and throws up - "Why is it so salty!" Mom says, "Why are you drinking soy sauce?"

7. Alarm rings. "Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!" Hit snooze, sleep again. "Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!" Once again, smash the button. "Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!" "Argh!" But this time what I hit was not the alarm clock, but the dorm parent's hand. 

8. Warm rice with my favorite crab soup. TV is on, and my brother's chattering. Here, I am - home sweet home.

9. Six years of elementary school seemed endless. Three years of middle school left some meaningful memories. Three years of high school, gone in a flash. 

10. <Facebook>
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       [ Mom likes your wall post.] 

Thursday, November 8, 2012

Autism, Children and Society - Ben X Review

 
     Ben X (2007), from its very beginning to its resolution, delivers a clear social message. The film provokes the audience to think about one of the problems, at once prevalent and less emphasized in our society, autism. How do most people think of this issue? It would not be a serious exaggeration to claim that all of us believe in equal treatment, respect and rights for every individual without discriminating one’s physical and psychological disadvantages. In other words, everyone thinks that we should not disregard the disabled. Nonetheless, reality is foul, truth inconvenient and society corrupted – humans are fond of ridiculing those who look different from themselves. Rulers imposed by the majority and the powerful binds the weak and less represented. Classrooms are never exceptions.

     Personally, I do have some experiences interacting with a classmate with autism during my middle school years. Based on my observations, it seems inevitable that autistic kids often are subject to spotlight. They show distinct behaviors, somewhat peculiar ones. One kid was known for his aggressiveness. He wasn't bulky and brawn but still he had extraordinary physical abilities. Walking down hallways, he sometimes clapped his hands so loudly that the clinging noise rang the whole school. Once he became famous for his weird claps, mean kids teased by clapping with silly faces whenever the boy passed by. The innocent kid never noticed the animosity hidden. The autistic boy thought that the sneers were smiles and their teasing, affection.

     However, the problems that autistic students suffer at public schools are much serious if the victims are females - a part of reality that even Ben X couldn't fully picture. There was actually one case of such tragedy in our school. She wasn't aggressive by a slightest sense. She didn't make much noise - she only stayed at her seat. She just stayed, still and quietly. However, middle school students, I guess, are yet too immature. I didn't get to learn what exactly happened, but I am sure something happened, and something horrible. I think it was some sort of harassment. The boys responsible were punished by the school board and later, some were transferred to different schools. 

     Watching such sad incidents, I felt that we really need much more care towards autistic students. Of course, these kids have choices of attending special schools were there are private tutors always ready for help and classmates with similar disadvantages and issues. However, according to what I have heard from one of the parents, the main reason why parents send autistic children to public schools is that they want their kids to get along with others, learn social life and do not get secluded from the society totally. Thus the parents and their children are showing great courage. What we should do, as a response, is to give them great care and attention, not teasing and discrimination.

     In short, it seems that the movie Ben X reminded me of such stories and experiences. I hope I get to think more about many problems and issues in our society, starting from ones close to my daily life. And also, I believe others who have watched this movie, would have felt in the same way as I have done. If more people get to think twice about autism, children and society, Ben X can never be a failure, but a powerful medium of enlightenment. 


Thursday, September 20, 2012

Revision for Assignment #1



A Note for Myself



YOU, give a pause to your busy life and please listen carefully. The past seventeen years of your life, which is both long and short, comprises many experiences. You underwent hardships, accomplishments and bittersweet incidents. Among those, you may not want to remember the painful past and efface it from your memory. Nonetheless, there is one important story to be remembered –a single shard of your past, yet the most essential lesson that will endure throughout your life. It’s not a long story, short and simple.
   YOU used to be an introspective, timid little boy. Loved by your parents, grandparents and other adults, you learned how to grow up as a “nice” and “polite” kid. The Korean culture enforced you to become the ideal child who never talks back, stays calm and speaks softly. Of course, this isn’t totally bad – no reason to hate a “good boy.” Actually, there had been no problems about this, just until you transferred to a school in Bundang at age ten.
   A new school meant more than a simple change in address. You had to make new friends, meet new teachers and furthermore, start a new life – totally unrelated to the one before. Here, personality mattered a lot, since kids had no background knowledge about you. Too polite and calm, kids found took you as an outcast. You weren’t fit to be a part of the bustling, lively pack of wild fifth graders.
  And detachment between you and your classmates reached its apogee during the soccer competition. Luckily, being one of the tallest boys, you were selected as a player to represent your class. The team was led by a boy named Dong-Jae, an athletic and influential figure in school. You tried your best – yet the game didn’t end until the final whistle of the extended period. Thus, you had to face the penalty shoot-out. All three kickers before you scored goals, thus making it a tie. Now, it became your turn, as the teacher, the referee, placed the ball on the kicking spot. You took a deep breath. But fear dominated you. Timid and afraid, you couldn’t concentrate. Your eyes trembled, hands shackled and legs ached when you realized the whole school boys were concentrating at your very moves. And as you had feared, you miss the goal. Immediately, kids blamed you, more than severely. They made you a fool, a dolt and an idiot. Suddenly, you became the subject of the greatest animosity.
   YOU! You should’ve known how to express your anger, despair and frustration about the unjust treatments. You shouldn’t have stayed there dumbfounded and speechless. After the matched was over and several weeks passed, kids still teased you for your mistake. You should have made it clear, “everyone can make mistakes!” Also, you could have bravely opposed against the disparaging comments. But, you did not. Moreover, you slowly seemed to lose confidence, silently concurring to the slanders badgering you and believing that you are, in fact, apprehensible.
   YOU – don’t derive cursory assumptions and misconceptions. You should’ve thought twice before making any more judgments. Since the day of your blunder, you lost all will to play with your friends. During recess and PE class, boys played soccer, giggling and chuckling, but you cringed alone in a shaded corner of the playground. You hastily believed that there was no one to help you. However, there were actually plenty – many of the quiet and reticent ones, those similar to you, tried to talk to you and play together. It was YOU who forced yourself to get tangled into the belief that nobody likes you. Your incomplete consideration made the situation worse.
   YOU; don’t compare yourself with others, especially, your peers. People are different. Dong-jae was an outspoken, out-going type of an individual. Also, he was born to be a talented athlete and a great sprinter. Condemning you for not being able to play soccer as well as he was an inappropriate idea. Know your strengths and weaknesses but don’t overemphasize becoming one of the crowds.
   Therefore, YOU. Have determination and conviction as a period should have. Be yourself. You must be a distinctive person, one who can speak out against unfair teasing and rumors. Think twice, and don’t exaggerate your miseries. To do so, have confidence in yourself. Get your gets, seek for self-esteem. Then, you shall be yourself.

Thursday, September 13, 2012

Martian Chronicles Quotation #1



“The smiling mask dropped from his face” (1999 The Earth Men)


     This quote instantly grasped my attention as I delve through The Martian Chronicles, an epitome of influential science fiction writing of the last century. Ray Bradbury, in the earlier part of this chronology, presents the how the Earth people and Martians first interact with each other. Specifically, the chapter 1999, The Earth Men, depicts the “Second Expedition” led by Captain Williams. He and his three men, expect astonishment and significant public commotion as an indication of the Martians’ attention. However, the residents of the red planet actually concerned them as insane men, and the quote above is mentioned as Mr. Xxx executes his “cure” to help the unfortunate earth men.

     The most fundamental theme in this chapter and the next is how people of Earth and Mars misunderstand, assume about and eventually kill each other. For both expeditions, the Second and Third, Earthlings were brutally murdered. Mr. Xxx who assumed that the rocket and even the three crew members were hallucinations, tests his hypothesis by shooting Captain Williams. But since their existence doesn’t vanish, Mr. Xxx himself turns insane because of the great shock. Here, the quote above adequately exemplifies the situation. “Smiling mask” represents the misunderstanding extant between the two races. Once the mask drops from the Martian’s face, he confronts reality, so daunting and impermeable. In other words, this quotation forebodes the upcoming intensity of the change of relationship between the Martians and Earth people, as in the next chapter, in which the Martians conduct premeditated decimation.